The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart presents the number of tourists to Ashdown Museum in the year before and after refurbishment. The data illustrates the proportion of survey tourists in satisfied times.
Overall
, the total number of visitors is considerably surged after repair. Linking Words
Additionally
, the result shows the citizen's satisfaction, enjoyment and reviews about the museum.
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To begin
with, the figure for foreigners has climbed after refurbishment, to be specifically sooner contributed 74 000 and later is 92 000. Linking Words
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results
of reviews are Correct article usage
the results
also
rising. Linking Words
Moreover
, there is a different pattern Linking Words
can
be seen in the survey the percentage of very satisfied Correct pronoun usage
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rise
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approxiamately
a third.
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approximately
On the other hand
, anyway, a large proportion of residents choose dissatisfied and very satisfied which is chronic. Before Linking Words
refurbishment
, the lowest percentage is very satisfied with Add an article
the refurbishment
four fifths
and after is 15%. Add a hyphen
four-fifths
Furthermore
, the survey of Linking Words
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