The bar chart shows coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and comparisons where relevant.

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The bar chart above illustrates the

Australians

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habits of coffee and tea buying in five cities in the

last

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four weeks.

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, people in Australia are most likely to

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to a cafe for coffee or tea. With the exception of those who live in

Adelaide

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. On the other side, the least goes to those who bought their coffee fresh. To start with, around 62 per

cent

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of Australians living in Melbourne and Hobart prefer to drink their

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coffees

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coffee

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in a cafe. Making it the highest point in the chart.

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, it is followed by Sydney and Brisban at 61 per

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and 55 per

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Adelaide

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hold

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the

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lowest

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amount at 39 per

cent

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. In terms of instant

coffees

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, most people in Brisban and Hobart are the most likely to do so. They hold the highest percentage at approximately 52 per

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. Continued by

Adelaide

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and Melbourne at 50 per

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and 48 per

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, Sydney

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both the lowest for instant

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coffees

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coffee

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and the highest for fresh

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coffees

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Whereas

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, the least to bought fresh

coffees

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go to those who live in

Adelaide

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and Brisban.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words adelaide, cent, coffees with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

188 words

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