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The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002.

The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002.
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The chart illustrates the total sum of
minutes
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 (in
billions
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) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three types, from 1995-2002.
Overall
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, the
uk
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UK
 telephone calls
was
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were
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 the highest in 2002.
However
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, the
calls
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number of calls
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 was the lowest in 1995.  It is quite evident from the chart, in 1995, the local-fixed
line
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 was above 70
minutes
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 (in
billions
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).
Moreover
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, the National and international- fixed
line
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 was below
to
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apply
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40
minutes
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.
Furthermore
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, the mobiles (all calls)
was
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were
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 under the 10
minutes
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 (in
billions
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) respectively.
In addition
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 to that,
the
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 significant incline in calls was held in 1999.
Although
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 the local-permanent
line
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 calls
was
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were
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 90
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billions
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billion
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minutes
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.
Additionally
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, the national and international- permanent
line
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 calls
was
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were
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 50
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billions
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billion
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minutes
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 .
Besides
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, the mobiles all calls
was
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were
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 above 10
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billions
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billion
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minutes
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 respectively.
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While
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apply
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, in 2002, the
uk
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UK
 telephone calls
was
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apply
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dramatically
increase
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increased
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that is
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 above 70
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billions
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billion
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minutes
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in
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for
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 local- fixed
line
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 and national and international-
permanent
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the permanent
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line
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was
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were
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 above 60
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billions
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billion
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minutes
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as well
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as
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and
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the
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apply
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mobiles
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mobile
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 calls
was
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were
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 above 40
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billions
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billion
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minutes
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 respectively.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words minutes, billions, line with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • total number
  • minutes
  • telephone calls
  • UK
  • divided into
  • categories
  • from
  • to
  • overall
  • increased significantly
  • local fixed-line calls
  • accounted for
  • largest proportion
  • throughout
  • period
  • international calls
  • highest rate of growth
  • experiencing
  • sharp increase
  • national long-distance calls
  • remained relatively stable
  • slight decline
  • towards
  • end
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