The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given graph shows data regarding the percentage of
population
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the population
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living in cities in four Asian countries. The information is for each decade from 1970 to 2040 with the
later
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latter
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two being predictions. By looking at the graph we can see that the main trend throughout the years is the increase in
city
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residents.
Overall
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in
Malaysia
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Malaysia,
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a much bigger part of the population lives in cities than in other countries. Indonesia, Thailand and
Philippines
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the Philippines
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have approximately the same share of citizens choosing cities as a place to live. The one striking difference between Malaysia and over three countries is that the former had a great surplus of
city
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population from 1990 to 2000,
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Philippines
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the Philippines
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, Thailand and Indonesia had a more steady growth all the time. The Philippines
have
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a slight difference from over three
counties
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countries
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. They had a quick increase of
city
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residents by 20
percents
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percent
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in 1990 but
then
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for 2
decades
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decades,
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there was a gradual decrease. From that
point
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point,
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the general trend continued without deviations. Future predictions show that
this
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trend of increase in the percentage of
city
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residents is going to continue.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 86%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words city with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • graph
  • percentage
  • population
  • cities
  • Asian countries
  • 1970
  • 2020
  • predictions
  • 2030
  • 2040
  • estimations
  • urban
  • increasing
  • steadily
  • Japan
  • China
  • rise
  • urbanization
  • South Korea
  • India
  • upward trend
  • slow pace
  • surpass
  • resided
  • projected
  • moderate increase
  • significant surge
  • exceed
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