the charts below give information on the ages of the populations of yemen dan italy in 2000 and projections for 2050

the charts below give information on the ages of the populations of yemen dan italy in 2000 and projections for 2050
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the distribution
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of the populations of
Yemen
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and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050 divided by three
age
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-range groups: young generation, productive
age
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group
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, and older generation.
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, the
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of both countries are dynamic with varied changes over five decades. In the year 2000, there were some notable similarities between the two countries.
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, nearly half of the
population
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of
Yemen
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are
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considered
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productive,
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in Italy, the
population
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was dominated by the productive
age
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. The proportion of older
age
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groups varied significantly, with
Yemen
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only having a small minority,
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in Italy,
this
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group
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made up almost a quarter of the
population
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. Projections
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2050 suggest changes in both nations, with a notable similarity: the working-
age
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group
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is expected to dominate the
population
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in both countries. Meanwhile, the difference is found in the older
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group
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, where in
Yemen
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it remains as the smallest fraction,
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in Italy it grows significantly, almost double the former number.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words yemen, age, group, population with synonyms.
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