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Some people think that public transportation should be free for all users do you agree or disagree with this opinion

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In a country like India, accessible modes of
transportation
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 play a vital role in society. Since our nation is still a developing nation, it implies that the majority of the population can't afford luxurious modes of
transportation
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 like a private car and have to resort to affordable options of public transport. Not only is it always about affordability, but it is sometimes about a faster route and way of
transportation
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.
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, in a city like Mumbai, people can, at large, afford private car or taxi services, despite that they still choose to travel by the local train as they are cheaper compared to private cars or taxis, and it is definitely way faster. They are unaffected by the weather and offer no risk of being stuck in traffic. Similar is the case of Delhi, where the Delhi Metro is a popular mode of transport. These are a few examples of prominent modes of public
transportation
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. The question that arises in the same context is
that
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whether
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 should it be free for all users or not
?
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 In my opinion, it should be chargeable for all. Every
such
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 mode of
transportation
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 requires maintenance, and the users should pay for the same. Apart from the maintenance, with due course of time, there is advancement or upgradation of technology. Every
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set up
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 requires a source of funding;
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 the users paying for it is just a small contribution to the same.
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, the charges paid
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 contribute to the salary of the people employed in the same field.
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, I would like to say that public
transportation
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 should not be free for all,
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 the charges can vary depending upon the social and
economical
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 factors.

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While the essay provides a well-supported argument, consider including counterarguments to show a balanced view and enhance the task response.
coherence cohesion
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The essay clearly supports the argument with specific examples, such as the mention of Mumbai and Delhi.
coherence cohesion
The essay has a clear structure with a distinct introduction and conclusion.

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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