The road in front of your house got damaged a long ago and nothing has been done about it. Write a letter to the municipal authority complaining about the damaged road. In your letter: · introduce yourself · explain the condition of the road · and suggest what they should do

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Dear

Muncipal

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Municipal

officer, I hope

this

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letter finds you in good spirits, I am writing

this

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letter to make a complaint about the condition of the

road

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on King

street

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Street

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apply

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and ask for your immediate attention. First and foremost, my name is Krushang

patel

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Patel

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and I reside at

cedarwoods street

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Cedarwoods Street

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kitchener

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Kitchener

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last

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winter the municipality constructed a roundabout

at the end

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of the street to tackle traffic,

while

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this

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was beneficial for the community, I would like to bring your attention to the lack of

maintainance

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maintenance

of the

road

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, during the construction the

road

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was not paved properly and

thus

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after the winter numerous potholes

appread

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appeared

on the

road

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and over the time the

conditon

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condition

kept on getting worse,

last

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night there was almost an accident

due to

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the driver

unability

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inability

to avoid the pothole. I would suggest that

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matter should be given immediate attention and

re-pave

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re-paved

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the

road

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as to

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repaired

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repair

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the

road

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also

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would like to recommend

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a montly

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montly

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monthly

inspection to avoid the

damages

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damage

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in the future. I hope you take action and mitigate

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this problems

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this problem

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, Krushang patel.

bhat.shweta17Sun Feb 09 2025

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coherence and cohesion

Make sure to split your ideas into separate paragraphs to enhance clarity. Consider making the transition between ideas smoother.

task response

Check for spelling and grammatical errors to increase professionalism, such as 'Municipal' instead of 'Muncipal' and 'appearance' instead of 'appread'.

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You clearly stated your name and the purpose of the letter, which is important for effective communication.

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You suggested a practical solution to the problem, which demonstrates critical thinking and involvement.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

181 words

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The road in front of your house got damaged a long ago and nothing has been done about it. Write a letter to the municipal authority complaining about the damaged road. In your letter: · introduce yourself · explain the condition of the road · and suggest what they should do

The Closing

Nowadays, young people spend too much of their free time in shopping malls. This has negative effects on themselves and the society they live in. Do you agree or disagree?

Students are becoming more and more reliant on the Internet. While the Internet is convenient, it has many negative effects and its use for educational purposes should be restricted. How far do you agree with this statement?

Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships that people make? Has this been a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, an increasing number of people with health problems are using alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their normal doctor. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.