The bar chart below shows transport preferences among young people in four countries in a single year

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The bar chart illustrates the

transport

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choices of young citizens in four different

countries

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in a year.

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, cars are the most popular mode of

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in the UK, USA, and Italy,

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motorcycles are generally less popular in most

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. In terms of car

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, people from Italy rank first with 74%,

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people from France are in the

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position with 40%. The UK and the United States had the same figure, namely 60%. Motorcycles and bicycles, compared to cars, had significantly lower figures, with 10% and 12%, respectively, being the least used vehicle type in Italy and the USA. The country that used bicycles as a mode of

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the most was France, with approximately 46%. In

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, unlike other

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, bicycle

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in France was approximately 46%, surpassing car

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by 6%. In conclusion, we can see from the chart

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that car

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usage

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is very popular in the given

countries

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, significantly surpassing other modes of

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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4 paragraphs

159 words

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The bar chart below shows transport preferences among young people in four countries in a single year

Robot and artificial intelligence are being developed to replace humans in the workplace. why is this happening? do you think this will have a positive or negative impact on society?

In spite of advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry.

People who damage public property, such as buildings or statues should be required to do community service (such as cleaning parks) as a punishment rather than other forms of punishment (such as paying a fine or going to prison). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Interviews form the basic selection criteria for most large companies. However some people think that interview is not a reliable method of choosing whom to employ. To what extent do you agree or disagree?