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The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in Netherland between 2001 and 2006. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in Netherland between 2001 and 2006. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table compares changes in the average
distance
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traveled
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travelled
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 per
person
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 annually in the Netherlands between 2001 and 2006 across various modes of transportation.
Overall
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, the total
distance
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traveled
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travelled
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 per
person
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 increased from 4740
miles
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 in 2001 to 6475
miles
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 in 2006. The car was by far the most commonly used mode in both years, accounting for 3199
miles
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 per
person
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 in 2001 and 4806
miles
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 in 2006, a substantial increase. Other modes that saw increases were local bus travel, rising from 429 to 274
miles
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, and the "Other" category which grew from 450 to 585
miles
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. Train usage declined slightly from 239 to 366
miles
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 on average. Walking remained the second most common mode after cars, though the average
distance
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 walked per
person
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 dipped modestly from 255
miles
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 in 2001 to 237
miles
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 in 2006. Cycling showed a similar small decrease from 51 to 41
miles
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traveled
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 annually per
person
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. Local
distance
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bus
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buses
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 and
taxi
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taxis
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 were the least used modes.
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 local
distance
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 bus travel more than doubled from 54 to 124
miles
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person
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, taxi usage remained low at 13
miles
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person
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 in 2001 and 42
miles
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 in 2006.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words distance, person, miles with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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