The graph below shows the number of passenger railway journeys made in Great Britain between 1950 and 2004/5. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of passenger railway journeys made in Great Britain between 1950 and 2004/5. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart depicts
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Information about journeys made by people using three different railway networks in Great Britain between 1950 and 2004/5.
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, it is evident that
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the National
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Networknetwork
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Network network
and London Underground network were the oldest and most popular means of transportation in Great Britain. In the year 1950, the National
rail
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network was used by more than 1000
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journeys which saw its peak at 1100
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, in around 1958.
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, it can be noted that after 1958, the popularity of the National
rail
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network dropped till 1981, which was the lowest point for
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company ranging from approximately 600
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.
Whereas
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, the London underground remained steady for approximately thirty-five years between 1950 to 1985.
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this
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period it dropped slightly by 150
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rides
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before it surged and reached above the mark of 750 first time in the year 1990, which
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further
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jumped to 990
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which was the second highest in the chart. The Light
rail
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and metro system was introduced in 1962, which remained the choice of a negligible population as compared to its fellow companies.
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