The graph below shows the rate of smoking per 1000 people in Someland from 1960 to 2000. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the graph below.

The graph below shows the rate of smoking per 1000 people in Someland from 1960 to 2000. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the graph below.
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The given line chart compares data about the number of people of different sexes per 1000 who smoked in Someland between 1960 and 2000.
Overall
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, it was important that the rate of men smoking
in contrast
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to women reduced over the period of 4 decades.
According to
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the diagram, At the start, males, the main group that had the highest figure of the population who smoked all the time, hit 600.
Thereafter
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, their score decreased moderately to 400 in 1985 after that, it declined slightly to just under 400. Later it dipped significantly to roughly 250 in 2000. The graph demonstrates that the females' fashion was the reverse of the males from 1960 to 1975 owing to the fact that in the beginning, they scored nearly 100;
then
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it leapt considerably and touched the vertex at just over 300 in 1975. and After that, it was constant until 1980;
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, they like the men dropped somewhat to approximately 200 in 2000.
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