The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.
The graph illustrates how much six different fuel used in the USA from 1980 to 2030.
Overall
, the most fuel used is petrol and oil, Linking Words
while
the least of citizens in the USA used hydropower from 1980 until prediction in 2030.
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Firstly
, the proportion of Petrol and oil increased and reached a peak of the highest from 35 quadrillion in 1980 to around 45 quadrillion in 2030. Linking Words
Furthermore
, the consumption of coal significantly increased and reached second place the highest from 15,000 Linking Words
units
to around 30,000 Use synonyms
units
. Meanwhile, the proportion of consumption natural gas had little increased from 20,000 Use synonyms
units
in 1980 and predicted in 2030 will steady around 25,000 Use synonyms
units
.
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Moreover
, both nuclear and solar/wind energy had little growth from less than 5,000 Linking Words
units
in 1980 to more than 5,000 Use synonyms
units
in 2030 (nuclear) and around 5,000 Use synonyms
units
for solar/wind. Use synonyms
While
Hydropower power decreased from 4,000 Linking Words
units
to 3,000 Use synonyms
units
.Use synonyms
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