The map below shows three proposed sites for a new supermarket (A, B and c) in the city of Ellington. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The map below shows three proposed sites for a new supermarket (A, B and c) in the city of Ellington. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The illustrated map comes with clear legends for the Pellington

area

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, which is an

area

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within 15 km of Hampford. The population between the two cities are quite significant

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Pellington is 4 times larger than the other. The intention of the picture is to help management determine the most suitable place for a new supermarket.

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, there are three distinct locations with various advantages and disadvantages to offer.

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A is the nearest one to Hampford where it can attract visitors from neighbouring towns which is very beneficial to potentially increase profit for the company.

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, it may not be that proper since there is an industrial

area

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nearby that can make the shopping experience less comfortable.

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, district B, located across District A and surrounded by residential areas;is

astrategic

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a strategic

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one since supermarkets can provide essential daily goods for the residents.

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, it is quite far from another city.

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but not least, region C, the farthest region from Hampford and outside community housings but very near the airport.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

171 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

proposed sites
supermarket
locations
central
outskirts
residential areas
transport hubs
proximity
major roads
landmarks
accessibility
competition
shopping district
industrial area
green spaces
logistic ease
isolated
densely populated
traffic
customer reach
expansion possibilities
accessibility
customer base
logistical convenience
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