The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons Where relevant.
The diagram
demonstrating
the procedure Wrong verb form
demonstrates
of
recycling renewable plastic bottles. The process Change preposition
for
containing
Wrong verb form
contains
main
9 Correct article usage
the main
step
.
Change to a plural noun
steps
Overall
, the recycling process Linking Words
starting
with Wrong verb form
starts
seperate
relevant rubbish and put into Correct your spelling
separating
right
garbage, and ending with Correct article usage
the right
produce
renewable new products.
Wrong verb form
producing
Firstly
, individuals Linking Words
throwing
their rubbish Wrong verb form
throw
to
relevant garbage. Change preposition
into
Secondly
, specialized vehicles Linking Words
is
carried renewable waste to Change the verb form
are
recycling
Add an article
the recycling
a recycling
centre
. Fix the agreement mistake
centres
Thirdly
, the employees Linking Words
sorting
Wrong verb form
sort
palistic
bottles and other Correct your spelling
plastic
type
Fix the agreement mistake
types
Change preposition
of wastes
wastes
. Afterwards, in Fix the agreement mistake
waste
this
Linking Words
center
, the employees Change the spelling
centre
using
Wrong verb form
use
necesseariy
machines Correct your spelling
necessary
necessarily
for
compress waste to become blocks. After that, Change preposition
to
this
blocks destroying to small pieces, Linking Words
furthermore
Linking Words
this
diminish pieces dropping to wash tank.
In 6 stage, after the wash, clear Linking Words
destroied
pieces Correct your spelling
destroyed
putting
into Wrong verb form
were put
machine
, and Add an article
the machine
a machine
this
machine Linking Words
enable
to Wrong verb form
enabled
producing
Replace the word
production
Change preposition
of platic
platic
pellets. Next level, pellets Correct your spelling
plastic
is
heated to Change the verb form
are
become
form raw material. Verb problem
apply
In addition
, Linking Words
this
raw material Linking Words
packing
and Replace the word
is packed
be
ready Unnecessary verb
apply
to
delivery. Change preposition
for
Finally
, the raw material Linking Words
using
produce specific renewable products Wrong verb form
is used to
such
as plastic bottles, clothes and Linking Words
pen
.Fix the agreement mistake
pens
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