The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons Where relevant.

The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons Where relevant.
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The diagram
demonstrating
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the procedure
of
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for
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recycling renewable plastic bottles. The process
containing
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contains
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main
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the main
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9
step
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steps
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.
Overall
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, the recycling process
starting
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starts
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with
seperate
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separating
relevant rubbish and put into
right
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the right
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garbage, and ending with
produce
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producing
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renewable new products.
Firstly
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, individuals
throwing
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throw
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their rubbish
to
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into
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relevant garbage.
Secondly
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, specialized vehicles
is
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are
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carried renewable waste to
recycling
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the recycling
a recycling
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centre
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centres
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.
Thirdly
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, the employees
sorting
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sort
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palistic
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plastic
bottles and other
type
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types
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of wastes
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wastes
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waste
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. Afterwards, in
this
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center
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centre
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, the employees
using
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use
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necesseariy
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necessary
necessarily
machines
for
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to
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compress waste to become blocks. After that,
this
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blocks destroying to small pieces,
furthermore
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this
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diminish pieces dropping to wash tank. In 6 stage, after the wash, clear
destroied
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destroyed
pieces
putting
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were put
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into
machine
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the machine
a machine
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, and
this
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machine
enable
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enabled
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to
producing
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production
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of platic
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platic
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plastic
pellets. Next level, pellets
is
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are
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heated to
become
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apply
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form raw material.
In addition
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,
this
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raw material
packing
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is packed
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and
be
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apply
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ready
to
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for
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delivery.
Finally
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, the raw material
using
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is used to
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produce specific renewable products
such
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as plastic bottles, clothes and
pen
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pens
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.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
Vocabulary: Only 1 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Recycling process
  • Disposal
  • Collection
  • Sorting
  • Cleaning
  • Contaminants
  • Recycling center
  • Plastic flakes
  • Melting
  • Re-shaping
  • Raw materials
  • Transformation
  • Repurposing
  • End products
  • Variety
  • Sustainability
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