The diagram below shows the life cycle of the Monarch butterfly. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the life cycle of the Monarch butterfly. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The image illustrates the metamorphosis of the Monarch butterfly within its life cycle.
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, the development of the Monarch butterfly from an egg to an
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is a natural cyclical process that consists of four stages. The process begins with the egg stage when butterfly eggs have been laid on the milkweed for
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maturing. After that, within a fortnight, they turn into a larva of the butterfly - the caterpillar. In the next larval stage, the caterpillar remains on the plant by attaching to it in a vertical position for ten days, covered with a hard shell chrysalis for additional protection
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developing. The third pupal stage is significant with the adult individual emerging from a chrysalis.
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the mature butterfly migrate to the South for the next half a year.
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, the
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needs
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migration to the North to meet a partner for mating and egg laying so
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reproduction cycle could begin.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • life cycle
  • Monarch butterfly
  • eggs
  • milkweed plants
  • larvae
  • caterpillars
  • feed
  • chrysalis
  • pupa
  • metamorphosis
  • emerge
  • adult butterfly
  • repeat
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