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Some people think that scientists experimenting with animal in a laboratory is the only way we can guarantee new products will be safe for Human's life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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new products
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 getting common and common. In the view of some people, the excellent method to find out that new
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products
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 sound safe to
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mankind is that first test on an
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the
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there are some other ways that we could check about the product
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efficiency
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 to prove the
product
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 potency for human usage. First and foremost,
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researchers
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an advance laboratory equipment
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 to simulate
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real life
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 scenarios in a laboratory facility
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animals
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. by doing
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scientists
 can still produce the results
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result
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 for the products.
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, allowing
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 to take
animals
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 into
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experiements
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experiments
 is one kind of animal cruelty.
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animals
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 not able to express their emotion in
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, they do feel pain and suffering.
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, around 60%
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animals
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of animals
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 which were used in the
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 facility had injury
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scars
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body
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, exploiting
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 right to do so. As
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human
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 out
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an
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reseach
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 if they want to as they have
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 and right to refuse
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animals
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 are excessively
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utilised
 for
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 without any restriction. In conclusion, I believe that
animals
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 should not be used
treated
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and treated
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 as
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tool
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tools
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 for
validation
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the validation
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 of products as there are
diffrent
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different
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avaiables
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available
 to validate a
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 safety.
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, there are some exception cases where
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scientists need
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 living
oraganizam
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organism
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task achievement
Ensure to provide more specific examples or data to substantiate your arguments, enhancing credibility.
coherence cohesion
Work on sentence structures and accurate vocabulary usage to improve the fluidity of your ideas.
coherence cohesion
Clarify and strengthen the logical relationships between your arguments to make them more convincing.
task achievement
Address potential counterarguments to strengthen your position and provide a balanced discussion.
coherence cohesion
The essay includes both an introduction and a conclusion, helping to frame the argument effectively.
task achievement
You address and refute an opposing viewpoint, which adds depth to the argument.
coherence cohesion
The introduction presents the topic clearly and states your stance.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Animal testing
  • Laboratory experiments
  • Safety and efficacy
  • Ethical concerns
  • Moral responsibility
  • In vitro testing
  • Computer modeling
  • Human reactions
  • Dependence on animals
  • Humane treatment
  • 3Rs principle (Replacement, Reduction, Refinement)
  • Reliable method
  • Innovative methods
  • Sustainable research practices
  • Animal experimentation
  • Data crucial
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