The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newport city centre from 2003-2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Kassiyet

The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newport city centre from 2003-2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Kassiyet
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The line graph illustrates the changes in three types of crimes that took place in Newport city centre between 2003 and 2012
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was the most common crime at the beginning of the period,followed by car theft.Meanwhile,incidents of robbery showed minor fluctuations and remained relatively stable throughout the timeframe. In 2003,burglary was the most frequent crime,with around 3500 cases.The figure rose slightly to over 3,500 before dropping sharply to just above 1,000 by 2008.Between 2008 and 2012,burglary incidents fluctuated between 1000 and 1500.
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,car theft ranked second in 2003,with approximately 2800 cases. It stayed at a similar level for the next two years before falling to just over 2,000 in 2006.
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was followed by a gradual rise, peaking at 2,500 in 2010, before declining again to below 2,500 by 2012. Robbery,
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in 2003,it increased gradually to nearly 800 by 2005 but
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fell back to 500. From that point onwards, it fluctuated within
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range until the end of the period.
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