The best way to reduce emissions from vehicles is to impose a higer tax on vehicles which use a lot of fuel and lower tax on those that don't. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some
people
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beleive
that directly Correct your spelling
believe
conecting
the amount of Correct your spelling
connecting
taxto
the amount of fuel consumption of Correct your spelling
tax to
cars
can increase the Use synonyms
poisionar
emissions from exhausts. Correct your spelling
poisoner
provisional
However
, I agree Linking Words
to impose
a higher Change preposition
that imposing
tax
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to
those Change preposition
on
vehicles
is an Use synonyms
innitiative
notion, I Correct your spelling
innovative
also
think governments should take other measures to help Linking Words
people
to Use synonyms
substitude
their fuel engine Correct your spelling
substitute
cars
with eco-friendly Use synonyms
one
.
on the one hand, higher Correct pronoun usage
ones
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tax
prevent drivers Fix the agreement mistake
taxes
to take
care a lot about their Change preposition
from taking
vehicles
in several ways. Use synonyms
Firstly
, they may try to invest Linking Words
on
new Change preposition
in
vehicles
that Use synonyms
has
new fabric engine which uses less Change the verb form
have
fuels
than the older Fix the agreement mistake
fuel
one
. Correct pronoun usage
ones
Secondly
, they may try a new Linking Words
ecy-friendly
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eco-friendly
car
which is not harmful Use synonyms
for
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to
environment
. Add an article
the environment
For example
, Linking Words
cars
which Use synonyms
use
electricity Use synonyms
instead
of Linking Words
fossile
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fossil
fules
not only Correct your spelling
fuels
files
causes
huge discounts on taxes but Correct subject-verb agreement
cause
also
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contributed
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contribute
supplyment
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supplement
preservence
and less-pollutions. Correct your spelling
preserve
preservice
Lastly
, high taxes may prevent Linking Words
people
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to
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from using
use
their Use synonyms
vehicles
in Use synonyms
unnecessary
manner. Change the article
an unnecessary
For instance
, employees try to go Linking Words
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to works
works
by public Fix the agreement mistake
work
transportation
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instead
of using their own Linking Words
vehicles
.
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on the other hand
, imposing Linking Words
high
amount of taxes without Correct article usage
a high
support
it with alter actions, can Wrong verb form
supporting
frustrated
citizens. in my opinion, it is important that governments provide financial Wrong verb form
frustrate
consessions
for drivers especially those who have to work with their Correct your spelling
concessions
car
, to substitute their old Use synonyms
fossile
fuel Correct your spelling
fossil
cars
with the new modern electric Use synonyms
cars
. Use synonyms
In addition
, investing public funds Linking Words
on produce
or Change preposition
in producing
emporting
eco-friendly Correct your spelling
importing
exporting
vehicles
can be another plan. Use synonyms
Moreover
, authorities should encourage and aware Linking Words
people
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to
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of using
use
public Use synonyms
transportation
not Use synonyms
ony
by Correct your spelling
only
tax
but Use synonyms
also
by improving the Linking Words
transportation
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infrastructres
.
In conclusion, Correct your spelling
infrastructure
infrastructures
although
I agree that inducing those with Linking Words
cars
that Use synonyms
use
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exessive
fuels extra to pay more Correct your spelling
excessive
tax
, can hinder Use synonyms
people
to drive Use synonyms
such
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cars
and lead them to buy Use synonyms
new
eco-friendly Add an article
a new
Use synonyms
car
or Fix the agreement mistake
cars
use
public Use synonyms
transportations
, I Fix the agreement mistake
transportation
also
think governments Linking Words
eighther
can play crucial Change the word
more eighth
roles
in reducing Fix the agreement mistake
role
emmisions
through Correct your spelling
emissions
car
exhausts by improving Use synonyms
transportation
or offer discounts for those who Use synonyms
wants
to buy new Change the verb form
want
cars
which Use synonyms
consumes
Change the verb form
consume
less
fuels.Change the quantifier
fewer
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