The chart shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.

The chart shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.
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The bar chart indicates the consumption of
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fast
food
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that
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and
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how frequently in
USA
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the USA
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between the years 2003 and 2013.
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, it can be seen that
majority
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the majority
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of people who ate fast
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are in the rage of those who ate once a week or twice a month in the years 2003 and 2013. The lowest percentages are from those who ate daily followed by those who do not eat junk
food
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at all. The highest junk
food
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was eaten about 33% found in 2006 and 2013 in people who eat fast
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once a week and
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once or twice a month. These were followed by about 31% who ate once a week and
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those who ate once or twice a month with 30%.
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the bar graph, the least used are 'every day' at about 5% between 2003 and 2013. Interestingly the 'never' users follow the same pattern.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: Replace the words food with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fast food consumption
  • Frequency
  • Dining trends
  • Demographic factors
  • Peak periods
  • Downward/upward trend
  • Lifestyle choices
  • Nutritional awareness
  • Economic impact
  • Health implications
  • Convenience foods
  • Eating habits
  • Statistical evidence
  • Year-over-year comparison
  • Fluctuation
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