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You saw an advertisement asking for help with a project focusing on improving environmental protection. Write a letter to project organisers. In your letter – Introduce yourself and say why you are interested to help – Explain how you could contribute to the project – Mention the days and times when you are available.

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Dear Sir/ Madam, I hope you are doing well. I am writing in regard to your advertisement about the environmental protection
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 posted on the volunteering website on Wednesday, June 23. My name is Bahareh and I am an environmental activist. I
ameager
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am eager
 to contribute to the
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 related to environmental issues. I am a student at George College in
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 management. I got
bachelor's
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a bachelor's
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 degree in Geography at university and I participated with many researchers in environmental issues as an assistant. Now, I would like to improve my skills in
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 management assisting. I am familiar with Microsoft unit graphic designing. I am able to help in data collection, data entry,
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 coordination and campaign design and implementation.
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, I can apply whatever I am learning in the
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 management course to do my tasks well. I am available on Mondays and Wednesdays after 12 p.m. I will be grateful to be part of
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. I am looking forward to hearing you Yours Faithfully, Bahareh
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Coherence and Cohesion
Ensure each paragraph contains a single, clear idea to enhance clarity.
Task Achievement
Recheck the letter for any typographical errors for a more polished presentation.
Task Achievement
The response effectively covers all parts of the task, from the introduction to expressing interest, explaining the contribution, and providing availability.
Task Achievement
The letter is polite and appropriately addressed, with a good greeting and closing.
Coherence and Cohesion
Logical progression of ideas is present, maintaining coherence throughout the letter.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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