The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons Where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the stages of the recycling procedure of
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bottles
which goes cyclical.
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Overall
, the recycling process is man-made and contains four cyclical stages, starting with the collecting the reusable Linking Words
bottles
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plastic
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bottles
and ending with the production of end products.
First of all the Use synonyms
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bottles
are thrown into recycling bins by individuals. Use synonyms
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, the goods are collected by a truck that delivers the Linking Words
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get compressed into blocks.
Following that, the compressed blocks are crushed and the small particles get washed at the same time. Use synonyms
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particles get through a machine that produces pellets. From Use synonyms
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, the pellets are heated from the ground to form raw material. Linking Words
Finally
, the formed raw Linking Words
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are used for producing new end products that can be used for recycling again later on, which is more beneficial than other non-reusable products.Use synonyms
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