The diagrams below show the development of Porth Harbour between 2000 and present. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The two maps illustrate how Porth Harbour developed from 2000 to the present.

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although

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the present size of the harbour is exactly similar to 2000, there have been significant changes to the infrastructure and facilities over a given period of time.

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, it is evident that there is an additional dock for passenger ferries. In the past, the castle which was situated on the

south east

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southeast

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side, including the

beach

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was not in use and there was no proper way to reach it, but in the present time, it has been transformed into a commercial hotel with a

beach

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of its own. A road was constructed to connect the hotel with the main road on the west.

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, no stores were there in the past, but now there is an area

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which cafes and shops

are build

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are built

are building

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next to

life boats

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lifeboats

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, there was only one dock in 2000, which has been increased to two in number.

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this

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, the places of Marina and fishing boats were replaced by each other's position. There was an additional toilet built for

public

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the public

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between the two car parks on the left. The things which remained the same were

main

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the main

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road, public

beach

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, lifeboat, private

beach

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, carparks and one toilet location.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words beach with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 3 times.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

210 words

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The diagrams below show the development of Porth Harbour between 2000 and present. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

People's shopping habits depend more on the age group they belong to than other factors. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think governments should increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles in order to solve environmental problems. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Now a days celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth than their achievements, this sets a bad example to young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that punishment is the best way of teaching children to behave well. Others believe that it is better to reward children for good be haviour. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In many countries today, major cities have become too big and overcrowded. Why is this? What measures could be taken to reduce this problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.