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The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The given table describes consumer expense data
on
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in
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 three categories which are Food/Beverage/Cigarette (the first item), Outwear/Shoese(the second) and
Entertaiment
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Entertainment
/Education(the third category) of five different citizens.
Overall
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, people
of
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from
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 five countries
spend
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spent
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 most of their money on Food/Drinks/
Tobaco
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tobacco
,
while
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 less spending was on Leisure/Education.
Further
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 details perspective, Turkish ranked on the top at 32.14% for generously spent on the first items,
following
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followed
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 by Ireland at 28.91%, and the other countries were less than 20%. In the second category, Italy was
on
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in
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the
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apply
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first place with 9%.
Mean
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Meanwhile
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while
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, Irish,
Spainish
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Spanish
 and Turkish were sharing the second place at roughly 6.5%,
Sweden
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and Sweden
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citizen
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citizens
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 was at
last
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 with 5.40%. Again Turkey
was
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apply
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with 4.35%
that
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apply
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was the country ranked on top for allocating spending on leisure/education. Spanish and Irish had expense on the third item
standed
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stood
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 at
last
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 at about 2%. The other two countries were
approximate
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approximately
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at
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apply
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3%.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last, while".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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