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The table shows the proportions of pupils attending four secondary school types between 2000 and 2009 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. (Chi Vu)

The table shows the proportions of pupils attending four secondary school types between 2000 and 2009 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. (Chi Vu)
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The provided table presents the enrollment rates of students in four types of secondary
schools
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—
specialist
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schools
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, grammar
schools
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, voluntary-controlled
schools
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, and community
schools
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—between 2000 and 2009. In 2009, community
schools
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 emerged as the most appealing school option for students,
while
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specialist
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schools
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 lost their appeal. A closer examination of the table reveals that voluntary-controlled
schools
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 held the largest share of students interested in 2000, with 52%.
This
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 number declined to 19% in 2005 and 12% in 2009.
In contrast
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, the
interest
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 in grammar
schools
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 was significantly lower in 2000, with only half of the voluntary-controlled school
interest
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. The rates of
specialist
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schools
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 and community
schools
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 were nearly identical, occupying 12% of the table each. Independent
schools
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, which ranked first in 2005 with 38%
interest
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, saw a decline in
interest
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 compared to the previous year.
Conversely
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, the
interest
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 in public
schools
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 among the learned population decreased by 6%. The
interest
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 in
specialist
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schools
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 and academic
schools
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 was both below 20%, with 11% and 19%, respectively. Public
schools
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 accounted for 58% of the total enrollment,
while
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specialist
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schools
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 held the smallest share at 10%.
This
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 figure was half of the
interest
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 in independent
schools
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 and academic
schools
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.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words schools, specialist, interest with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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