The graph shows the average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the UK, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

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graph illustrates the proportion of carbon dioxide (CO2) emitted in 4 countries, the UK,

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, Italy,and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.

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, the amount of CO2 has a slight rise in Italy and Portugal but, the figure shows the amount of metric

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of CO2 dropped slowly and

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has different fluctuations

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period of time. As the details show Italy and Portugal have approximately a like graphs. In 1967, Portugal had the lowest percentage of CO2 emissions (about 1 metric tonne)and after that,

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proportion increased by almost 6 metric

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in 2007. compared to the UK in 1967 was at the peak of CO2 emissions (11 metric

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) decreasing slightly until 2007.

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has considerable fluctuations from 1967 to 2007.

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the amount of CO2 in

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started at about 8 metric

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and it rose rapidly by 1977,

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year

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number dropped for 10 years(1987) and after that decreased steadily. The graph of Italy is similar to Portugal’s figure. It started at nearly 4 metric

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and after that, it almost doubled between 1967 and 2007,

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increase continued before levelling off from 1997 to 2007.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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4 paragraphs

193 words

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Some people think that the benefit of running a small business is to employ family members. What are the advantages and disadvantages of running a family business?

Many museums charge for admission fee while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh disadvantages.

Many people believe that zoos have no purpose in todays world and should be closed. What problems do zoos bring ? What are the alternatives to zoos if they are closed?

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people think that secondary school children should study international news as one of the school subjects. Other people think that it is a waste of valuable school time. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.