You are a member of an International Students' club. The club is organising an event to celebrate popular food from around the world. Write a letter to the event organiser, Luis. In your letter offer to make a popular dish from your country describe what this dish is explain why it should be included in the event Begin your letter as follows:

#member #students #club #event #food #world #organiser #luis #offer #dish #country

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Dear Luis, I am writing

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letter regarding the

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of celebrating global famous

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. My name is Smith and I am studying at law college. I am happy to participate in

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event

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and I would like to offer to make one of the popular dishes in my country at

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. The dish that I referred to is Fish and chips which is one of the most delicious dishes in the UK cuisine.

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dish contains crumbled fried fish and at the side are fried potatoes. The potatoes look like French Frise.

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, we usually in my country dip the fish into egg and flour and after that, we fry it at a high temperature. In my opinion, it would be better if you consider including

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food

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in the

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because young people often like

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kind of

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which reminds them of fast

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, it is easy to prepare

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dish and serve it. I look forward to

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your response. Kind regards, Smith

Submitted by YT on Wed Jan 22 2025

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Task Achievement

Try to expand on why fish and chips is significant in your culture to further enhance the inclusion justification.

Coherence and Cohesion

Ensure consistency in plural forms (e.g., 'crumbled' vs. 'fried') for greater clarity.

Task Achievement

The letter effectively meets the task requirements by offering a dish and its benefits for the event.

Coherence and Cohesion

Paragraphs focus on distinct points, ensuring clarity of ideas and themes.

Coherence and Cohesion

Appropriate greeting and closing, creating a courteous tone suited for formal correspondence.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

170 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Enthusiastic
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Ingredients
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Cultural significance
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