More and more people in developing countries are purchasing cars for the first time. What problems does this cause? What do you think are the possible solutions?

There is a growing demand for buying

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, especially for

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who want to buy their first car. An increased

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of

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can trigger

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and traffic congestion.

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, it can be tackled best by encouraging sharing

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and using public transportation. The main issue

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of

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is crowded streets with vehicles. In fact, it can be seen clearly in small towns with

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extensive road lines. When

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possess

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and use them for even a short distance, streets become full of vehicles, and many get stuck in traffic, which can in turn cause irritation and annoyance.

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, there is a close link between

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and

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pollution. The more the

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of

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is, the worse the

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of

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becomes. Since

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burn fossil fuel namely gas to start the engine of their

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, more greenhouse gas would be emitted and could deteriorate the

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quality

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. To address

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issue, governments can introduce new initiatives, namely car-sharing

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. Indeed, when

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want to commute to work, they can arrive

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colleagues who have the same destination.

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could reduce carbon footprint

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causing a considerable reduction in

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.

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better public transport can discourage

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from using their personal

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.

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, cities with efficient, fast and cost-saving means of transport,

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as bus and metro, can attract

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to consider them as an approachable way.

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the

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of

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would decrease significantly, other nations could take the same step globally.

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increased

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number

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of personal

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could bring about traffic congestion and deteriorated

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of

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, there are some effective approaches,

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as using shared

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and different modes of public transport that can be impactful

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