You recently borrowed an item of clothing from a friend. While you had this item, it was damaged. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter you should: • apologise for damaging the item of clothing • explain how it became damaged • say what you will do to fix the problem

Dear Maria, if you remember, I took your dress for my prom. And I have a problem with it. I want to apologise. When I tried to close it on my back, I heard a strange sound, and when I turned it off, I understood that I had broken it. I do not know how it happened. So, I think that you should know that. Sorry, Maria, I think that I should give you some money. Can you tell me how much

this

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dress costs?

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, I can go to the woman who can fix it.

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, I want to say that I can do it quickly. In the end, I will do everything possible for the best results. If you want to get your money back, tell me about that.

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, I hope that you understand me

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you can. I can not wait to see your answer. Lots of love, your Evgeniya

acaitaz

Jan 23, 2025

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clarity

Be clear about what happened. Say simply: I broke the dress when I tried to fasten it.

action

Say the next step in a simple way. Tell what you will pay and how you will fix it.

structure

Put one idea in each paragraph. Start with sorry, then the reason, then the plan.

tone

Keep a kind and calm tone and use short, easy words.

tone

You give clear apology.

content

You offer money to pay for the dress.

action

You say you can fix it.

tone

The letter has a friendly feel.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

157 words

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