The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.

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The maps illustrate the changes of a public library from what it was 20 years ago and how it appears now.

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, it can be seen that the whole

consept

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concept

is changed considerably and more facilities like

self service

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machines are introduced to the library. The first change to be noticed

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is the diminishing of tables and chairs from the centre of the floor.

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, the adult fiction books used to be placed between the two rooms on the east side of the map. They are now transferred to the other side and replaced with

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reference books. One of the interesting changes is the reorganisation of the

north-east

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room

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. It was used to store CDs, videos, and computer games, but now it is a place to hold storytelling events and

also

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to place children’s fiction books.

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, the up-right corner

room

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is changed to a lecture

room

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. As there are new self-service machines, there would be

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less need for

receptionist

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, there is a small information desk between the right rooms.

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, the enquiry desk

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the

south-west

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southwest

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of the library is no

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needed and it

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has been

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changed to a café which gives the late-night readers a chance to stay awake by drinking coffee.

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the new

progresses

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in technology, the reading

room

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the down left corner seemed to be useless, so it

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replaced with a computer

room

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after the refurbishment.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words room with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 6 times.

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5
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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
15
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

236 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

floor plan
layout
shelving
reading area
reference section
encyclopedias
dictionaries
circulation desk
transactions
digital media
computer stations
multimedia rooms
café area
social environment
leisure-friendly
expanded reading areas
user experience
comfortable seating
children's section
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