The chart below shows the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by car. Summarise the information be selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparison where relevant.
The two pie charts illustrate the primary
reasons
why individuals opt to travel to Use synonyms
work
either by bicycle or by car. The Use synonyms
reasons
are categorized into various factors Use synonyms
such
as health benefits, environmental considerations, convenience, and practical needs.
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Overall
, cycling is primarily preferred for health and environmental benefits, Linking Words
while
driving is Linking Words
favored
for comfort and long-distance travel. Each mode of transport has distinct advantages, catering to different priorities of commuters.
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favoured
According to
the pie charts, health and fitness, Linking Words
along with
reducing pollution, are the leading Linking Words
reasons
for cycling to Use synonyms
work
, each accounting for 30%. Other significant factors include the absence of parking problems (15%) and the cost-effectiveness of cycling (13 Interestingly, only 12% of people consider cycling faster than driving as a reason to choose Use synonyms
this
mode of transport.
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On the other hand
, comfort emerges as the dominant reason for driving to Linking Words
work
, comprising 40% of responses. Long-distance travel ranks Use synonyms
second,
at 21%, highlighting the practicality of cars for longer commutes. Linking Words
Reasons
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such
as carrying items to Linking Words
work
and the perceived safety of driving, each representing 14%, are Use synonyms
also
notable.Linking Words
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