The diagrams below show the present building of a college and the plan for changes to the college site in the future. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the present building of a college and the plan for changes to the college site in the future. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagrams below show the present building of a college and the plan for changes to the college site in the future. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The image illustrates the present college and the plan for an extension by the year
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2020.
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, what stands out from the plan is that the
foothpath
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footpath
and the garden will be removed, allowing to renovate the building with more classrooms and carpark space. At
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present, looking
indoor
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indoors
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, the school consists of two classrooms and a lunch area
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the west side, and one classroom, reception and a library
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the east side of the building,
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the reception
located
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in the south. Moving to the outside area, it is possible to observe a car
pak
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park
that fits four cars, and a
foothpath
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footpath
covering it,
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by a garden space. The future plans
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to remove the
foothpath
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footpath
and the garden, allowing more space to park cars, jumping to six car spots
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of four. In regards to the building, the whole place will be readjusted, starting with two more classrooms and a shop. The new allocation will be, the shop, lunch area, one classroom and the library located on the west of the building, and the four new
classroms
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classrooms
on the east. The new allocation of the toilet will be in the north,
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by the reception in the middle.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • architecture
  • renovation
  • infrastructure
  • facade
  • landscaping
  • expansion
  • amenities
  • accessibility
  • pedestrian
  • vehicular traffic
  • demolition
  • construction
  • recreational areas
  • commons
  • atrium
  • courtyard
  • upgrade
  • sustainability
  • commute
  • ingress
  • egress
  • blueprint
  • survey
  • layout
  • zoning
  • modernization
  • conservation
  • integration
  • footprint
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