Write a letter to the company from who you purchased an item from which you are disappointed write about the product and why you are disappointed and what are you expect from

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
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letter to express my
dissastisfaction
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dissatisfaction
about the product I purchased from an online website.
Last
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month, I bought a Sony camera,
model
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the model
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is
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a core
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core
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Core
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i5 and it is black in
color
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colour
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. I paid
full
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the full
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amount with my debit card and I have a
reciept
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receipt
of
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for
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this
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product. I was very happy when I purchased it. I am very concerned because
camera's
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the camera's
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sensor is not working properly and the pictures it takes always come very blurry .
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, when I purchased
this
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product it was assured to me that it comes under a
gurantee
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guarantee
of 2 years but when I came to your shop
last
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week, nobody
listenend
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listened
to my complaint and I had to leave
a
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the
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shop with
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old camera. I would really appreciate your assistance
to
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in
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this
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matter. I would be very happy to get my money back or even if I am getting a replacement
of
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for
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gadget. I look forward to your prompt response. Yours
Sinecerely
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Sincerely
, Amanjot Kaur.
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Structure Advice
Make sure to address multiple issues in separate paragraphs for better readability.
Content Advice
Include more specific information about your expectations, such as a timeline for response or action.
Introduction Highlight
The letter opens with a clear purpose and provides context by describing the product and purchase situation.
Closure Highlight
The closing statement clearly requests a refund or replacement, maintaining a polite tone throughout.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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