The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbition, and planned future development of the site.

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The two maps illustrate an industrial site in Norbition town and the future developmental plans

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area.

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, it can be seen that it is planned to transfer factories to

housings

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and introduce new facilities like

school

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schools

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, medical

centre

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, and shops. If we look at the details, Norbition is a small industrial town with eight factories. In future, it is projected to take down all of these buildings and construct new facilities and

accomodations

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accommodations

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developments will be the introduction of a school on the east side of the map. On the

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, there will be a new playground which will be between two small-sized houses and on the other side of the street, there will be a new enormous building. A new medical centre is set to be built

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the south and there will be some new shops across the street. Now, there is

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farmland above the river. In the future, it is planned to allocate some parts of

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land to build a big house.

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, another key change will be the appearance of a new bridge on the river that attaches

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site to a new branch of the main road.

bahram.azizzadeFri Jan 24 2025

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The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbition, and planned future development of the site.

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