The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbition, and planned future development of the site.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbition, and planned future development of the site.
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The two maps illustrate an industrial site in Norbition town and the future developmental plans
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area.
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, it can be seen that it is planned to transfer factories to
housings
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and introduce new facilities like
school
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schools
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, medical
centre
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, and shops. If we look at the details, Norbition is a small industrial town with eight factories. In future, it is projected to take down all of these buildings and construct new facilities and
accomodations
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accommodations
accommodation
. One of the
intresting
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developments will be the introduction of a school on the east side of the map. On the
north-east
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, there will be a new playground which will be between two small-sized houses and on the other side of the street, there will be a new enormous building. A new medical centre is set to be built
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the south and there will be some new shops across the street. Now, there is
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farmland above the river. In the future, it is planned to allocate some parts of
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land to build a big house.
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, another key change will be the appearance of a new bridge on the river that attaches
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site to a new branch of the main road.
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