The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010.
The illustrated bar graph provides the amount of various outlay in the France and United Kingdom during
one
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a
year
period. Correct your spelling
one-year
This
information is measured in currency. Types of expenses Linking Words
such
as cars, computers, books, perfume and cameras are listed.
Looking at Linking Words
an
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the
overall
structure, it is obvious that the indicators Linking Words
of
in the first country Change preposition
apply
are
observed a gradual reduction, Unnecessary verb
apply
while
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in
most of the expenditures are registered an increase in the second country. When comparing two countries, the UK is larger than France in most cases.
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apply
Initially
, we should note that the rate Linking Words
of
in France, which accounted for 400,000 in cars, almost 370.000 in computers, Change preposition
apply
about
300.000 in books. İn terms of other categories it continued a decline, which in perfume and cameras with 2000.000-150.000, Correct word choice
and about
accordingly
.
When it comes to the quantity of UK expenses, cars Linking Words
is
comprised Correct subject-verb agreement
are
with
450.000. Change preposition
of
Similarly
, the figure Linking Words
of
books is high more or less 400.000. Change preposition
for
However
, Linking Words
currency
of computers and cameras is constituted 350.000-360.000, respectively. Exceptionally, perfume was lowest with 150.000Add an article
the currency
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