The charts below show the growth in the population in some of the world’s largest cities over three time periods. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar charts compare the rise in the
population
in five different countries between 1970 and 2010.
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Overall
, it is readily apparent that countries had a growth. Linking Words
Tokyo
had the highest proportion of the Use synonyms
population
throughout the period, Use synonyms
while
Jakarta had the lowest percentage of the Linking Words
population
throughout the Use synonyms
year
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To begin
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Tokyo
, New York and Shanghai had the largest proportion of the Use synonyms
population
at the beginning of the Use synonyms
year
(16%, 18% and 12%, respectively). Use synonyms
Moreover
, Bombay and Jakarta had the smallest share of the Linking Words
population
with 5% and 2% in 1970. By 1990, countries had a growth. Use synonyms
Tokyo
had a considerable rocket to 23% and New York climbed minimally to 16%. They had the largest contribution to the Use synonyms
population
in the world.
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In contrast
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Tokyo
had risen noticeably to 27% in 2010, Use synonyms
whereas
New York soared slightly to 17% Linking Words
at the end
of the Linking Words
year
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Furthermore
, Shangai went up significantly from 13% to just over 20% in 2010, Linking Words
however
, Bombar had an increase suddenly from 12% to 26% Linking Words
at the end
of the Linking Words
year
.
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Finally
, Jarakta had doubled from 9% to 18% in 2010Linking Words
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