You have recently used the services of a moving company. At the new place you found out that some of your items were badly damaged. Write a letter to the company manager including the following: Give details of your move List items that were damaged Say what you expect the manager to do
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing
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letter to bring your attention to a matter of concern regarding the recent service I used from your moving company.
On Dec 1st,2024,I hired your services to relocate my household belongings from 54 Major WM Sharp Drive to 43 Bairleyfield Drive in Brampton.Linking Words
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I appreciate the efficient handling of most of my items, I am deeply disappointed to report that some of my possessions were severely damaged during the move.
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I understand some accidents occur during the moving process,but it is essential that my belongings are treated with care and professionalism.Linking Words
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issue promptly in a timely manner and fair resolution which, may include compensation for repair or the cost of damaged items.
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incident can be addressed promptly to maintain the reputation of your company and to ensure customer satisfaction.
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Sincerely,
Amandeep KaurLinking Words
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task achievement
Consider adding more specific details about the move, such as times or additional context, to fully cover the task requirements.
coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single idea or group of related ideas, providing clearer transitions between sections if needed.
coherence cohesion
The letter follows a logical structure, with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion, which aids in reader comprehension.
task achievement
The language used is appropriate for formal correspondence, maintaining a respectful and clear tone throughout.
coherence cohesion
The letter successfully ends with a polite closing, leaving a positive final impression.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.