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Nowadays, many students choose to study in another country to learn its language. What are the benefits of this trend? What are some other ways to improve their foreign language learning?

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We live in an age when almost all students
study
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an other
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language
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 for their career growth. From my point of view benefits of learning foreign dialects outweigh the drawbacks. Let us examine both views before reaching a concrete decision. First of all, knowledge of not only your own
language
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 allows you to get to know another culture. In fact, it will help you improve your communication skills to connect with people of other nationalities so you can expand your abilities to your advantage.
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one of the significant
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 why students begin to learn various speeches is the open more opportunities in
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the educational
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 sphere. Graduates
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explore
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 English, French, Chinese, Arabian and so on,
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move
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 abroad and
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 in foreign universities. At the same
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 they try to get a full grand for
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 abroad, because as far as we know accommodation and
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 in some countries
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 expensive.
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, one of them is cost. Enrolling in
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 classes, purchasing
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 materials, or hiring tutors can be high-priced, making it inaccessible for some individuals. After all, we can summarise, that
acquisition
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 of knowledge of another
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 is one of the best
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, which will help you live and
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 better.
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 a crucial investment of time and effort.

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introduction conclusion present
Improve the introduction and conclusion by clearly summarizing the benefits discussed in the body.
relevant specific examples
Use specific examples or experiences to support the main points.
logical structure
Enhance the logical flow between paragraphs, ensuring a smoother transition between ideas.
complete response
The essay provides a complete response, addressing both benefits and alternative ways to learn a language.
clear comprehensive ideas
Main points are clearly identified and discussed, making it easy for the reader to follow the argument.
coherence cohesion
The essay recognizes the importance of learning foreign languages for cultural understanding and career opportunities.

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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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