The chart below shows the ownership of electrical applianeces and amount of time spent doing housework in house holds in one country between 1920 and 2019.

The chart below shows the ownership of electrical applianeces and amount of time spent doing housework in house holds in one country between 1920 and 2019.
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The upper line chart gives data about the electrical devices availability in one specific country,
while
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the second shows the hours
spended
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spent
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on households between 1920 and 2019.
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, what stands out from the graphs is that the popularity of electric
applances
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appliances
highered
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higher
as
the
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time passed.
whereas
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, the amount of housework hours lowered. If we look at the details for the percentages of washing machines, It started at 40%, which means it had the highest usage that year. It
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gradually
rised
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raised
rose
rise
to 70%, in 1960. Despite
depping
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dipping
slightly for two decades, it
imporoved
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improved
to just over 70%, in 2019. As for
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the refrigerator
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refrigerator
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refrigerators
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,
It
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did not exist in people's houses in 1920. But, it started to increase sharply, Rocketing to
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100%, in 1980. At
this
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point, it
reamined
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remained
steady until the end of the period. Samely, regarding
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vacuum
cleaner
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cleaners
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, It began at 30%, which was ranked second in the first year.
Subsequantly
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Subsequently
, it experienced a steep growth over
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following 80-years period, surging to
the
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100%. It remained constant from 2000 to 2019, which was tied with refrigerator usage. As
regard
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the house working hours per week, it took half of their time, in 1920.
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, it fell
dramaticly
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dramatically
over the period mentioned in the question, Finishing at only one-tenth, in 2019.
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