ı The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a european country beetwen 1979 and 2004.
This
graph illustrates the Linking Words
overall
Linking Words
grams
per person per week of fish and meat, including Use synonyms
chicken
, beef and lamb from a region in Europe between the years 1979 and 2004.
Use synonyms
Overall
, Linking Words
chicken
was the most consumed one by the Europeans Use synonyms
while
fish was the Linking Words
last
preferred meal.
Looking at the data in greater detail, in 1975, beef was eaten by the people the most with over Linking Words
than
200 Change preposition
apply
grams
. It Use synonyms
also
experienced fluctuations. Linking Words
However
, it gradually declined and lost its popularity to Linking Words
chicken
. Even though Use synonyms
its
surges, Correct pronoun usage
it
chicken
is the only meal that Use synonyms
faced
with an incline. It is noticeable that around 1989, the amount of Add a missing verb
is faced
chicken
and beef consumption was the same with nearly 200 Use synonyms
grams
. Meanwhile, eating lamb dropped almost 100 Use synonyms
grams
from its starting point until 2004. Use synonyms
In contrast
, fish was the only meal that stayed stable. Except for a small Linking Words
downwards
in the beginning.
In summary, Fix the agreement mistake
downward
chicken
took the lead and had a Use synonyms
slowly
but stable increase throughout these times.Change the word
slow
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words grams, chicken with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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