The pie charts below illustrate the number of journal articles read per week by all students, PhD students, and junior lecturers at an Australian university.

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The given charts illustrate the percentage of
students
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at Australian universities who read journal articles every
week
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based on categories of all
students
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, PhD
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, and junior
lecturers
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Overall
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, all
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display that they have less
frequent
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to read the journal,
while
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PhD
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most
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intensive, and junior
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lecturers
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lecturers are
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moderately
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Firstly
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, the majority 67% of all
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have 1 to 5
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to explore the journal article every
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, and 21% more intense 6 to 11.
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, there are 12 % who read more than 12
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a
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In contrast
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, 80% of PhD
students
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have a massive habit of reading
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journal article every
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However
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, there are 15% moderately read 6 to 11 per
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In addition
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, there are 5 % that take less frequent to read every
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at 1 to 5
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. Another trend is that a third of junior
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prefer to read 6 to 11
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weekly.
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, almost half of the junior
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have read more than 12
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every
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,
however
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, only 1% of them read 1 to 6
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per
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