The maps below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and in 2010. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and in 2010. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and in 2010. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps illustrate the constructions and establishments in the Stokeford village in 1930 and 2010.
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, it is noticeable that by 2010 enormous farmland territories were substituted by a huge number of houses along the main highway and new side roads. In detail, in 1930 there were gardens on the eastern front of the road which were demolished and a retirement home was established in the same place by 2010. On the opposite sector, farmland areas were razed to the ground and numerous houses were constructed
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. In the North-West sector, there were 2 shops next to the post office in the first period, which disappeared by the second period.
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area was filled by a side road by 2010
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and had houses lined on every edge of the street. In the Northeast, there was a primary school in the former term which expanded its size by the latter term. Farms on the North-East edge were
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demolished and replaced by border roads and homes.

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