The maps below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and in 2010. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The map indicates some

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about the village of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010.

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, some places

such

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as River Stoke, bridge and post office did not change during these years.

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, the removal of grazing land for animals and the construction of houses for the elderly indicate that the population has increased.

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the first map, there was a farm for animals between the river stoke and the footpath. You can

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see two shops as you go towards the bridge. At the bottom of the bridge, in the right corner, was the area designated for animals. In the 1930s, you can see people giving away large gardens and houses.

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, 80 years later, in 2010, you can see that the number of houses has increased and farmland has disappeared. You can

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see that people are building housing for the elderly.

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, large supermarkets have already caused the elimination of small shops.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "indicates" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

159 words

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The maps below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and in 2010. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The users of social media, such as Facebook, Twitter, are replacing face-to-face contact in this century. Do you think the advantages of this way outweigh the disadvatages?

Some say that music, art, and drama are as important as other school subjects, especially at the primary level. Do you agree or disagree?

In some developing countries it is difficult to recruit teachers to work in remote and rural areas and this can have a serious impact on education in these regions. Why do many teachers not want to work in these areas? What can be done to encourage teachers to take up posts in these regions?

Some peole say that too much time and resources are spent on the protections of wild animmals and birds. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that with the increasing use of mobile phones and computers, people lose the ability to communicate face to face. To what extent do you agree or disagree?