You have been living in an apartment for the last three years. A few problems have emerged in your apartment since the last repair. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter, give details of the last repair work what the problems are now how you would like the landlord to solve these problems You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ......................,

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Dear Mike, I can't imagine that it's been three years that

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joyous about my tenancy in your apartment.

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, I'm writing

this

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letter to inform you about a few repairs required since the

last

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maintenance. Previous summer, I recall there was a scheduled apartment supervision , and you had your contractor fix some of the issues. To elaborate, the kitchen sink was broken and you got that replaced. Another alteration was made

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apply

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in the balcony by

intsalling

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installing

safety nets along the border

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so that the pigeons are restricted. Having said that, these repairs are in

a functioning conditions

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functioning conditions

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now, and can't thank you enough for it

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However

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, since

last

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month, I have encountered other problems;

firstly

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, there is a leakage

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the drawing hall's ceiling, and

its

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losing paint.

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, I have discovered the

name plate

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on my letter box has an improper alignment. So far, these are some repairs that can't be avoidable. The resolution to

above

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the above

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concerns can be addressed in

following

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way. For ceilings, a

water proofing

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waterproofing

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check and filling some plaster in the cracks would ensure a clean look for my guests. As for as

its

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it's

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concerned for the letterbox, tightening-up a couple a couple of

screw

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should work. I'd request you to look into these concerns

asap

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. Regards,

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Coherence and Cohesion

Improve paragraph structure by ensuring each paragraph addresses a single main idea clearly to enhance coherence.

Coherence and Cohesion

Pay attention to minor grammatical errors and typos to improve clarity.

Task Achievement

The letter addresses each part of the prompt effectively, providing details about past repairs, current problems, and suggestions for solutions.

Task Achievement

The tone of the letter is polite and appropriate for a communication with a landlord.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

214 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

repair work
landlord
maintenance
issues
inconvenience
urgency
cracked walls
faulty heating
leaky faucet
timeline
professionals
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