The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent.

The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent.
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The presented
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and pie chart illustrate the police budget for 2017-2018 in
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region of Britain .The
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describes the sources of
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,which are measured in millions of pounds .
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the chart shows the allocation of
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.
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, it is clear from the
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that the sources of
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income experienced an increase throughout
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period .Meanwhile ,salaries (officers and staff ) were the highest category that was the most
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spent on . Looking at the
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in more detail, the National Government was the greatest source of income
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both years ( 175.5m and 177.8m respectively ).Local taxes were the
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income and it experienced a significant growth from 91.2m to 102.3m . Other sources saw a small change of 0.5 million between 2017 and 2018. Turning to the pie chart , the greatest amount of payment was spent on salaries (officers and staff) but it went from 75% to 69% . Technology has approximately doubled .
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from 8% to 14% in 2018. The
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that was spent on building and transport remained unchanged through these over two years , still at 17%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words table, money, m with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • budget
  • funding sources
  • national government
  • local taxes
  • distribution
  • allocation
  • salaries
  • technology
  • infrastructure
  • workforce expenses
  • modernization
  • investment
  • fluctuation
  • financial planning
  • policy direction
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