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The table below shows the amount of waste production (in millions of tonnes) in six different countries over a twenty-year period.

The table below shows the amount of waste production (in millions of tonnes) in six different countries over a twenty-year period.
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The table gives information about the number of waste products(in millions of tonnes) in twenty years in six countries.
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while
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 the highest dross rate was experienced in the US in all years,
Ireland
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 was on the
last
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 of
this
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 list. Starting with 1980, the percentage of unusable items production in the US was extremely high compared to other countries at 131,000,000
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Ireland
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 experienced the smallest result at 0.6 million. The proportion of
debris's
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debris
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 in Poland and Portugal was quite similar at 4,000,000 and 2,000,000 respectively. There was no rubbish in Korea. In 1980, the US
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 led at 151,000,000. Japan and Korea experienced approximately the same amounts at 32,000,000 and 31,000,000.
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 time in
Ireland
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 there was no trash at all. Regarding 2000, in former years, the US was leading among other countries at 192,000,000. In
Ireland
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 and Portugal, there were the smallest numbers at 5,000,000 in each one. In Japan, there was a total of 53,000,000 tons of scrap.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words ireland with synonyms.
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