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The pie chart illustrates the most popular sports in French secondary schools in three different years. Summarize the main features and make comparisons where relavant.

The pie chart illustrates the most popular sports in French secondary schools in three different years. Summarize the main features and make comparisons where relavant.
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The pie charts provide information about the most popular
sports
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 in secondary schools in France in 1990, 2000, and 2010.
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, swimming remained the most popular
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 in three different years in France among secondary school
students
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. The
popularity
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 of other
types
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 of
sports
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 gradually decreased.
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 the
popularity
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 of
basketball
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 decreased in 2000, it increased in 2010. The
popularity
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 of
football
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 experienced an increase in 2000, and a dramatic decrease in 2010. The
popularity
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 of tennis remained the same in 1990 and 2000
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 and experienced a slight increase in 2010. In 1990, 39% of French
scondary
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secondary
 school
students
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 preferred swimming, and in 2000, the
popularity
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 of swimming increased and around 48% of
students
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 preferred swimming. It declined slightly in 2010, and 41% of
students
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 preferred swimming in 2010.
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, in 1990, 25% of
students
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 preferred other
types
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 of
sports
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, and in 2000, it slightly decreased and 23% of
students
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 preferred other
types
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 of
sports
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. In 2010, it experienced another decrease and 19% of
students
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 preferred other
types
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 of
sports
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. In 1990, 16% of
students
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 preferred
football
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, and in 2000, 18% of
students
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 preferred
football
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. In 2010, the
popularity
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 of
football
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 declined sharply and only 8% of
students
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 preferred
football
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.
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, in 1990, 16% of
students
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 wanted to play
basketball
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, and its
popularity
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 dramatically decreased and only 7% of
students
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 preferred
basketball
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 in 2000.
However
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, the
popularity
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 of
basketball
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 increased sharply in 2010, and 25% of
students
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 preferred
basketball
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. Meanwhile, in 1990 and 2000, only 4% of
students
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 preferred tennis, and in 2010, it slightly increased, and 7% of
students
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 preferred to play tennis.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words sports, students, popularity, types, basketball, football with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "dramatic" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 4 times.
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