Nowadays, in a world with new
modren
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modern
technologies
many products now have an alternative Add a comma
technologies,
for
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apply
it
and cigarettes are an example of Correct pronoun usage
apply
this
with the new attention Linking Words
into
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to
the
e-cigarettes which Correct article usage
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called
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are called
vapes
. Use synonyms
However
, the main reason for Linking Words
this
new product was to encourage smokers to quit as Linking Words
people
believe that it is less harmful Use synonyms
on
our Change preposition
to
health
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unlike
regular cigarettes which are known to contain many different chemicals. And many individuals think vaping should be banned in Ireland. In Add the comma(s)
, unlike
this
essay, I will discuss why vaping should be completely Linking Words
ban
in the country.
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banned
To begin
with, many countries tried to Linking Words
banned
smoking products in the Change the verb
ban
last
few years because of the Linking Words
grate
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great
harm
effect on their citizens Replace the word
harmful
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also
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and also
for
the huge cost Change preposition
of
on
the Change preposition
to
health
care system. And some of them Use synonyms
acheived
that after a long discussion between the government and the manufacturers, which ended with finding a new solution or a new product that can help Correct your spelling
achieved
people
to quit smoking and it was Use synonyms
vape
. Wrong verb form
vaping
Although
, the Linking Words
purposs
of Correct your spelling
purpose
purposes
vapes
was to reduce the Use synonyms
nmuber
of Correct your spelling
number
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the smoker
smoker
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smokers
but
eventually it increased Remove the conjunction
apply
them
and most of the users are teenagers. Correct pronoun usage
apply
For instance
, teenagers believe that vaping makes them look cool Linking Words
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that
is why they are the Correct pronoun usage
which
bigger
proportion of Correct word choice
biggest
the
vapers around the world.
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apply
Furthermore
, Linking Words
Vapes
were originally made to help adult smokers quit traditional cigarettes, vaping has Use synonyms
instead
become a common habit among teenagers. Many young Linking Words
people
are drawn to vaping Use synonyms
due to
attractive Linking Words
flavors
, and peer pressure, believing it to be less harmful. Change the spelling
flavours
However
, the reality is that Linking Words
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vapes
liquid Change the noun form
vape
have
a high amount of addictive substances like nicotine, which can harm their physical and mental Correct subject-verb agreement
has
health
. Ireland will have a new generation with many serious Use synonyms
health
issues, including respiratory problems, Use synonyms
heart
disease. Addressing Correct word choice
and heart
this
issue now is critical to protect the Linking Words
health
and future of young Use synonyms
people
in the country.
In conclusion, I believe vaping should be banned not only in Ireland but worldwide. And countries must launch campaigns to raise awareness about its dangers and promote a healthier society.Use synonyms
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