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Band 5

You have recently read an article in the newspaper about someone you know personally. You found that some information is wrong. Write a letter to the editor to inform him about it. In your letter, write: what the article is about what the error is what you expect the editor to do

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Dear Sir or Madam I am writing to you about the news that was printed yesterday in News Everyday which belongs to your company, about the incident that happened with my relative two days ago is misleading.
While
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, reading
this
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 came to my attention that you had changed the whole
scenerio
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scenario
, even though his
car
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 got hit
with
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by
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electric
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an electric
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 pole and
it
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apply
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was damaged just letting you know that it was not completely his fault. When he was riding
in
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at
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the
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a
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 normal speed sudden how, a stray dog came in front of his
car
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, just to save that stray dog he got no
choise
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choice
to
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but to
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 move the
car
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 immediately in
other
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another
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 direction
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due to
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apply
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that his
car
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 got hit with
electric
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an electric
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 pole.
Whereas
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,
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 what I read in the newspaper was completely different, your newspaper moulded the news into rash driving and damaging the government's property. I have been reading your newspaper
from
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for
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very
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a very
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 long time and
this
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 was not acceptable from your side.
However
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, I ask you to investigate
on
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apply
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this
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 topic and print
this
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new
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news
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 again with complete truth and you and your team should
appologise
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apologise
from
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to
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 the
victims
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victim's
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 family Yours faithfully Param

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coherence cohesion
Ensure that paragraphs each contain a single, clear idea to improve readability.
task achievement
Clarify your expectations for the editor more explicitly in the letter.
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Be more precise with language to avoid misunderstandings.
coherence cohesion
The letter begins with a clear greeting and ends with a suitable closing.
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The tone of the letter is respectful and appropriate for writing to an editor.
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