the maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and comparisons where relevant.

the maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for the maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and comparisons where relevant.
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The maps compare changes
of
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an industrial
area
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in the town named Nobiton between the current layout and the future development plan into a residential
area
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.
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, the entire factory clusters will be demolished and turned into housing
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area
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areas
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.
Also
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, the housing
extend
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across the river.
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,
playground
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playgrounds
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,
school
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schools
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, shops, and medical
centre
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are developed on the east and south of the
area
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.
To begin
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, there are currently eight factory clusters scattered around the
center
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and east side of the map, with no other infrastructure. Meanwhile,
on
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the north, farmland is entirely occupied
the
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whole space across the river. In the future, all the industrial clusters will be changed to households. With more road extension to the west and across the river, the housing
also
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expand
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to the west and the north side.
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, public spaces,
such
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as
playground
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playgrounds
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,
school
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schools
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, shops and medical
centre
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centres
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, will be built near the neighbourhood.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: Replace the words area with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • planned future development
  • factories
  • warehouses
  • railway line
  • shopping center
  • residential buildings
  • college
  • mixed-use zone
  • commercial
  • residential
  • educational
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian walkways
  • housing
  • community
  • retail services
  • revitalize
  • quality of life
  • vibrant
  • sustainable
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