You have just spent a weekend at a friend's house. When you returned home, you discovered that you had left a coat there. There are some important belongings in the pockets. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain that you have left the coat there say what the coat looks like, where you think you left it and what was in the pockets make some suggestions about how to get all of your belongings back

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Dear Pat How are you, I hope that you're doing well, I would like to say a 'big thank you' for having me at your place

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weekend. Anyway, I'm writing

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because when I reached home I realised that my jacket was missing and even after looking everywhere in the house I was unable to find it. I think maybe I left it at your home. I don't remember exactly, but I'm sure that I left it on your couch in the living room. it's a

winter-coat

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winter coat

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black in colour with a logo of "Nike" printed on the left shoulder side.

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the jacket itself is not important to me, it has my wallet

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contains driving license, bank cards and a few $100 bills.

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, I know that you're busy

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week.

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, if you can send it via the local courier service or bring it to me when you're visiting Peter's house that will really save my drive to your place. Take care and convey my regards to your parents. Lots of love, Badar.

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Provide a clearer description of the coat's location and condition, and consider adding a brief apology for the inconvenience caused.

coherence and cohesion

Ensure the punctuation is correct, especially capitalizing the first letter after a full stop.

task achievement

The letter uses a friendly and polite tone, suitable for a message to a friend, which enhances the writing's effectiveness.

coherence and cohesion

Good organization with clear sections for each part of the letter, making it easy to follow.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

177 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

appreciation
accidentally
distinctive features
fabric
inner/outer pockets
courier service
parcels
reimburse
inconvenience
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